“Echoes through time” is a storytelling concept that revolves around a present-day character, object, idea, or experience that reverberates a long-forgotten event from history. This concept is used to add mystery to a story or a piece of writing that the reader unravels by piecing together these “echoes” and uncovering the full, poetic truth of the past. “Echoes through time” is an insightful tool that also makes the reader realize that the past isn’t truly gone. Rather, it is subtly imprinted on the fabric of the present and it reveals itself little by little through clues that lurk in the depths of the present moment.
Anushree works in an art renovation company called RenoKaro,
based in New Delhi. Her boss sent her to an old, dilapidated library located in
Delhi’s Khapchi Gali for a renovation project. As she stepped inside the
library, the bag of tools slung from her shoulders, she coughed. The library
was shrouded in a thick veil of dust and sprinkled with gossamer cobwebs. The
spines of decaying books dangled from rickety bookshelves, whose wood seemed to
be chipped and gnawed by mysterious mice. Seeing the ragged condition of the library,
Anushree doubted whether she would be able to complete the renovation project.
This is the first echo that the writer presents to the reader, unfolding one
layer of the past.
Nevertheless, she started the work. Being a book-lover, she
dipped her head into one of the bookshelves and was stunned to discover some
perfectly-preserved peacock feathers laid flat between the pages of many books
– not the vibrant blues and greens, but shimmering, almost translucent silver.
For a faint period of time, she put down her tools and let her curiosity be
immersed in the tales and trinkets that were hiding in these books. Each
feather seemed to evoke an unsettling melody, a dim whisper, as if wind chimes
played by ghosts of the past. One diary in particular was scrawled with an
archaic script that detailed the tale of a visionary empress who commissioned a
"Silver Peacock Garden" – a mystical garden where peacocks would
guard her and her lover as they spent moments of romance. This is the second
echo the writer shares to unravel the mystery of history.
The third echo hit the story as the diary recited the tragic
ending of the empress’ love story, her empire, her lover, and the peacocks.
Upon the curse of an evil sorcerer who desired to marry her, her garden was
swallowed by an alien planet and the peacocks had to leave the fortress to
become guardians of the legend of the emperor and the empress. After reviewing
these books, Anushree realized the feathers were not just relics, but echoes of
the past – the ancient songs that those peacocks whispered in the garden for
the empress. She photographs the books and the feathers and the company retells
the forgotten story to the world. And thus, the library turns into a popular
sight-seeing spot visited by millions of curious tourists each year. The
diaries and feathers are exhibited behind glass cases and the story is narrated
by telescreens attached on the library walls.
The final echo by the writer will prompt the reader to take
some action, to feel connected to RenoKaro. Basically, this final echo will act
like a nail which will lock the reader’s mind into believing and trusting that
this renovation company doesn’t just renovates old things, but also revives old
art and unravels forgotten stories from history. The reader will either
approach the company or save their name in their favorites list for the future.
Thus, the story or the commercial will succeed in converting this customer for
the company.
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